I've been refining this application for the past few weeks -- but I'm always looking for any feedback I can get. Let me know if you think I should make any last-minute changes (or even what you liked/disliked about it).
Just a reminder that applications are due in tonight. Good luck to everyone!
Have you read this? - http://ycombinator.com/howtoapply.html
You seem to fail the PG test for "What is your company going to make?".
"A suite of tools that make software development and team workflows more efficient."
One test of whether you're explaining your idea effectively is to ask how close the reader is to reproducing it. After reading that sentence I'm no closer than I was before, so its content is effectively zero.